I chose to have a black background within a landscape canvas to hold the imagery in. The contrast of a white bowl with blood red soup. As I used a stock image for the letters meaning it's difficult to make the text bigger, however I have considered in my official poster that it is the main focal point.
A lot of potential here.
ReplyDeleteCould you play around with the title - as it is I feel it is too small. Could you create a separate layer, still using the alphabet pasta, but making it bigger. The idea of including the eye is good, its just that the image is unclear, so can you manipulate to ensure that it is obviously an eye?
The bottom is a little too congested. Try moving the actors to the top. Move billing block of the main red part of image and then align the rest of the text - you have an imbalance above Isobel Gray.
An excellent first draft and plenty to work on here.